www.joyeriafaraone.com

[genarg]

Hi, i have been reading this forums for a couple of days and i think if not the best, is one of the greatest forums around the web for web developers.

This is my first post, soo, be nice.... ;P. jk, i need to improve my site, soo, i need to heard all the critics about it..

thanks in advance.

http://www.joyeriafaraone.com/

NOTE: The site is in spanish, i would translate it to english later, if u want to get and idea of whats is all about, use this link instead.

http://translate.google.com/translate?u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.joyeriafaraone.com%2F&langpair=es%7Cen&hl=en&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&prev=%2Flanguage_tools

edit: this is my first try.

[fmiles]

The first thing that instantly caught my eye is that you used a awful-looking fake italic in “Joyería” and not a real font. If you're concerned about the website's image, you should get a separate font (Benguiat Italic) for that. But once again, I don't know how much you're willing to invest in the design.

You have a nice technically validating website, but I don't know what it's about so can't comment on the design any futher.

[fmiles]

Oh, I read the translation now. Jewellery, right?

I think the design is a little bland. Benguiat is a relatively good choice for the logo, after you've fixed the artificial slanting, but the rest of the design could be easily made more interesting.

Jewellery shops often use marco photos and the designs have a strong sense of expensiveness. Mostly if you look at a website of a jewellery shop, you instantly notice that it's got something to do with jewels or antiques even without reading any text.

Here are a couple example sites: Example 1 (http://www.antiek-zilver.nl/) | Example 2 (http://www.tarkiainen.fi/)

So, the design could communicate a bit more.

[jackyboy]

fmiles... the 2nd one of your sites has scroll bars at even my large resolution . And has no options to buy.

U should make ur sites in english as most dutchies can speak it and u then apeal to the whole eu market.


www.secret-treats.com (http://www.secret-treats.com)

feel free to comment on my site in the correct thread ;)

and to joyeriafarone.com ... its ok pretty basic ... could use more graphics and features

oh and the font in the logo ... if thats your logo its fine .. ignore fmiles imo

but because its so simple it will index well on google

jack

[fmiles]

fmiles... the 2nd one of your sites has scroll bars at even my large resolution . And has no options to buy.

U should make ur sites in english as most dutchies can speak it and u then apeal to the whole eu market.A few corrections: the sites weren't made by me and reading the texts isn't the point right now. They're examples of visual designs.

oh and the font in the logo ... if thats your logo its fine .. ignore fmiles imoThe font is great, but the italic is slanted, fake italic and look clumsy computer-generated. It's a question of style and all about giving a professional image about your company. Like, you can always go to a funeral in a red pullover and training pants, but while others are wearing black suits...

[KDLA]

Hola -
Your site is very simple. Nice, clean coding.
One thing: for a "store" site, it is a little image bare.

KDLA