review my website

[gathersuccess]

Hi... I seriously not here to advertise my website product or services...
I just need comments on the following on the website

You can view my website at http://home-based-business-school.com

Was the website easy to read?

Did you get the message about what I am selling on my website?

Was my website's SEO good?

What you thought of the website?

How would you rate the website out of 10, 10 being interesting website and 0 being.. totally not interesting?

[abz]

cut the red on yellow thing. Its horrid. The page is *far* too long. Split it up into different pages. People dont like reading 10 scrolls worth on the first page. All the first page needs to do is say 'Hi, this is my site. My site is abuot X, you will also find X. Use this page for Y, and this page for Z'. That is the most iomportant thing to appear on a home-page in my opinion.

Your screen shots are too small to read.

Congratulations for taking this effort to actually view my website.
This sounds like you are accusing the user of usually being lazy. Like my mum used to say 'oh well done, you actually bothered to tidy your room this morning...'

Your site has NO NAVIGATION!! For as much information as that, you really need it.

I hardly read any of your site. It is plain and boring text, badly structured, with garish highlights. Remember less is more. Text doesnt have to be 40pt for people to take notice of it.

technically speaking, your site has 33 errors, and 79 warnings. You should really chech these things before you make a site Live. www.w3.org

Overall, unless your viewer is already interested in reading the page, I personally don't think many people would read to the end.

abi