d3sc3n7
03-05-2007, 11:15 AM
This is a site in development...and no it wont be on angelfire when its done
http://www.angelfire.com/crazy/amf
http://www.angelfire.com/crazy/amf
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Twissler
03-05-2007, 12:16 PM
The graphic at the top probably needs some help.
Dark blue text on a black background isn't good for readability.
I have no idea what "we got the NUTZ!" means, but it doesn't exactly make me feel comfortable.
There's a lot of negative black space on the graphic at the top. Sometimes white space is a good thing, black space for the most part isn't. It feels very negative and seems to weigh things down.
And the black background for the cards is lighter than the black background used for the rest of the header graphic.
It also appears that the navigation extends far beyond the graphic, which looks a little odd.
You may want to do something with the background image to make it repeat more smoothly. As it is right now, I'm running 1440x900 and there's a very abrupt line where the background stops and starts again.
Dark blue text on a black background isn't good for readability.
I have no idea what "we got the NUTZ!" means, but it doesn't exactly make me feel comfortable.
There's a lot of negative black space on the graphic at the top. Sometimes white space is a good thing, black space for the most part isn't. It feels very negative and seems to weigh things down.
And the black background for the cards is lighter than the black background used for the rest of the header graphic.
It also appears that the navigation extends far beyond the graphic, which looks a little odd.
You may want to do something with the background image to make it repeat more smoothly. As it is right now, I'm running 1440x900 and there's a very abrupt line where the background stops and starts again.
KDLA
03-05-2007, 12:30 PM
Not impressed with this -- it seems to be mostly centered on advertising others rather than providing an actual service/content. Most of the navigation buttons do not work.
Perhaps you should work on this more, and then repost for reviews?
KDLA
Perhaps you should work on this more, and then repost for reviews?
KDLA
Twissler
03-05-2007, 12:41 PM
Okay...since I posted, you have removed the banner and flooded the site with google ads. That's not the right direction to be going.
d3sc3n7
03-05-2007, 12:53 PM
Okay...since I posted, you have removed the banner and flooded the site with google ads. That's not the right direction to be going.
Google ads? Was that in the directions? You must have checked it while I was in the middle of working on it. I was trying to link to some yahoo directions but that didnt work out. So all the "Directions" really suck right now.
I know alot of the links and stuff are not up yet...I've only got about 2 days work on the site.
I know the banner needs work. It was just a base banner. and yes the banner and menu bar will be matched up.
"We got the Nutz" is the owners "Saying" its a poker thing.
Google ads? Was that in the directions? You must have checked it while I was in the middle of working on it. I was trying to link to some yahoo directions but that didnt work out. So all the "Directions" really suck right now.
I know alot of the links and stuff are not up yet...I've only got about 2 days work on the site.
I know the banner needs work. It was just a base banner. and yes the banner and menu bar will be matched up.
"We got the Nutz" is the owners "Saying" its a poker thing.
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