intro or rather the start of one

[ennui]

tell me what you guys think.. its just the start of the introclick <<<here>>>> (http://www.grailviper.com/hello1.htm)

[havik]

Took long to load, but I'm at work and the connection is slow.
Not bad for what it is right now. I'd be interested to see the completed intro.

Havik

[Jona]

Yes, truly not bad! A little bit high on the loading time there, but not that bad at all. :)

[J]ona