Please review my website

[Angela Brown488]

Thanks all for this great forum that allows us have a glimpse of what people think of our sites and blogs.....
Please review my website, and waiting for your comments...
the Home Page (http://egyptopia.com)
Any feedback, evaluation, suggestion is greatly appreciated!
And I'am having trouble with traffic for it is still new - any thoughts would be great!

thanks in advance...!!!

[donatello]

Hi Angela,

Looks ok.

One thing I would do to improve the 'bounce rate' is to double check the English. There are mistakes that will turn people away.

I understand that a lot of people do not speak English as their first language and produce content in English - a lot of small mistakes will turn off readers very quickly.

Traffic will come over time. You can try to put some content on other pages that might help.

Some tips:
A video on Youtube about Egypt that links back to your page. You can either produce one yourself, or find someone who has produced and posted one that did not link to their own site... write to them RAVING about what a wonderful video they have created and would they mind you using it on your site... and By the way, would you mind linking to it?

Make some teeshirts and put them for sale in your little 'store' at CafePress. Link back to your page from your storefront. Yahoo traffic. :)

Post a couple of articles on travel to Egypt on Hubpages and Squidoo. Link back to your page.



It's work!
Good luck, and keep plugging away.
The place which needs the most work is the English - like many others...

Your first paragraphs...

Welcome to Egyptopia.com, your new gate for Egypt, with thousands of articles, photgraphies covering all Egypt's monuments and places. You can visit Cairo, Alexandria, Luxor, Aswan, the Red Sea, the Oasis and more. And do not forget to have a look at Egypt delicous dishes in our recipes section.You can also participate in our forums about any topic, photography, news or product in Egyptopia.com.


My suggestion:

Welcome to Egyptopia.com, your new gateway to Egypt, with thousands of articles, photographs and more covering all of Egypt's monuments and attractions. You can visit Cairo, Alexandria, Luxor, Aswan, the Red Sea, the Oasis and more. Do not forget to have a look at the many delicious Egyptian dishes in our recipes section. You can also participate in our forums covering just about any topic; photography, news or products in Egyptopia.com.


Use a spell checker! Don't start sentences with "And". :)
Please do not be insulted, I'm really trying to be helpful. :) :)

[Angela Brown488]

I can't find words to express my appreciation to ur "MORE-THAN-WONDERFUL" analysis....
I will really try to do some changes and take the tips of traffic into account and make use of YOUTube and likewise sites
And I'll work on ur nice suggestions...
Thanks a milion

[andr105]

I think all left menu tabs should have the same horizontal alignment.

[Angela Brown488]

I think all left menu tabs should have the same horizontal alignment.
thanks so much
i really apappreciate ur contribution, and i'll try to work on it too :)