Website check

[jengarweb]

Hi Guys just joined the forum, hope to give my two peneth worth and help when needed, jsut re-designed my website am a small web designer and thought i go for the social networking side of the market by incorporating wordpress into my site, totally designed the wordpress theme www.jengar.co.uk (http://www.jengar.co.uk). Cheers Jengarweb

[donatello]

Looks pretty good.

Some suggestions:
SPELL CHECK!!!! Mileage is misspelled, there are misplaced apostrophes on plurals which imply possession... etc.
SPELL CHECK to look professional.

The top of the about page has a thin black band with white text that is totally unreadable. White text on a black background is an old "Ogilvy" faux pas, but small white text on a black background is worse.

Good luck with the site.

[andr105]

Nice page, but I think that the picture in the middle is superfluous. By the way, what does this picture symbolize?

[criterion9]

I clicked on about and had some trouble seeing the menu options until I moused over and saw a "flicker" effect. Maybe darken up your gray scale on the menu items so we can that they are there. I also had trouble reading your contact info at the very top of the same page because the font was a little small (I don't have the best eye sight) and the border seemed to encroach on the text a bit making it even harder for me to see. The landing page was very clean and crisp which is good but there seemed to be a little disconnect between the landing page and the other pages. It wasn't quite like it seemed like I moved to another site but it wasn't as cohesive as it could be.