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lukaz
11-01-2009, 07:28 AM
Hey guys and gals,
I have just put my website live and would like some constructive critisisum on it. Please dont go to far down the road fog critisising my graphic design as I am not a graphic designer but a php developer, so I am more interested in knowing if the site flow is good, how it loads, how user friendly it is, wether or not it throws any errors at you, I have done a lot of testing but I can only look at it from my point of view. The site is at, http://www.gymfree.net.
Thanks in advance guys
Luke

lukaz
11-02-2009, 04:45 PM
bump, Feel free to critique the graphics as well. I guess I have to know how bad/good it looks to people too.

mordauk
11-02-2009, 07:42 PM
A couple of things. First the flow and organization is fine, it's simple and clear. Second, I feel that there are a of areas that too empty. Example, several of the nutrition pages have large blank spots beneath the text. These places are distracting by how empty they are. Whether it be a graphic of some sort, perhaps a photo, or a brief bit of content that connects to another part of the site, something needs to be filled in.

I would also do some simple photoshop work and remove the white background from the product photos. They're really distracting on top of the gray background.

lukaz
11-03-2009, 03:27 AM
Thanks, I will look into photoshopping the images tonight, although im not sure what content i will add to the more sparcely populated pages, so that might take a few days.
cheers
Luke

andr105
11-03-2009, 08:09 AM
I think you should make up the types in one style because the page looks a bit scattered. Your site is simple and clear, it downloads rather quickly.

lukaz
11-03-2009, 08:26 AM
Sorry andr105 what do you mean the "types"? Not sure which part of the site you mean by that, thanks luke

andr105
11-03-2009, 08:28 AM
I mean the letters in the text on your page:)

lukaz
11-03-2009, 08:31 AM
Apart from any images, all the font faces are set by the body style which is arial, there arent any different font faces.