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rhsunderground
11-22-2004, 11:55 PM
WHOA DONNA!!! I submitted one of my poems to poetry.com awhile ago and now I got a letter in the mail saying I'm a semifinalist in their poetry competition. Top prize: $10,000!!!!!!! WOOOOOOT!!!1!!!1!!!11!!1!1!!one!!!!1!1!eleven!!1!
btw- teh poem:
Falling Awake
Hugging, crying, living, dying
Life is as good as the promises you keep
Hiding, seeking, laughing, weeping
Our love is hanging on a cliff so steep.
You hate me, you love me, you need no more of me
Your heart flies above like a kite in the wind
I loathe you, I love you, can't get enough of you
I try to catch you but you fly off again.
Falling, flying, believing, denying
Our love is as strong as a kite in the wind
Talking, listening, breaking, mending
We put things together, so happy again.
Wanting, needing, time is fleeting
I must always know; ignorance will bring death.
Stopping, passing, knowing, asking,
We'll love all our best 'til there is none left.
buntine
11-23-2004, 01:29 AM
Good job. I hope you do well. ;)
I always knew you were a good poet but now it's a fact for all to see. Good job. :)
pawky
11-23-2004, 08:33 AM
awesome :D gl with the final results. $10k sure would be nice ;)
steelersfan88
11-23-2004, 07:25 PM
As your client, do i get 50 or 60% of your earnings ;)
rhsunderground
11-23-2004, 09:28 PM
HA! no way i could ever split up all my clients. if anything i'd have to give money to the guy that wrote it.
i mean..................erm....................
steelersfan88
11-24-2004, 05:37 AM
hehe very nice :D
Ben Rogers
11-24-2004, 01:01 PM
Yeah, good luck. It'd be the biggest acheivement ever brought home to Nebraska! :p
rhsunderground
11-24-2004, 02:44 PM
well, that and the presidency, but who cares about that anymore?:rolleyes:
Ben Rogers
11-24-2004, 02:53 PM
Originally posted by rhsunderground
well, that and the presidency, but who cares about that anymore?:rolleyes: Steelers, Peo, and you, but thats's about it. :D
drumbum360
11-29-2004, 01:25 AM
HA! no way i could ever split up all my clients. if anything i'd have to give money to the guy that wrote it.
:eek: hahaha. Fit that one in there really slickly. Add that (slickly) to your dictionary.
Paul Jr
11-29-2004, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by Ben R.
Steelers, Peo, and you, but thats's about it. :D
...You forgot me.
steelersfan88
11-29-2004, 09:09 PM
When did you get rid of your avatar!?!?!
... I gues sits OK cuz I put my devil back :D
Paul Jr
11-29-2004, 10:23 PM
Originally posted by steelersfan88
When did you get rid of your avatar!?!?!
... I gues sits OK cuz I put my devil back :D
lol, I got rid of it a while back. I like this one I have now, so I'ma keep it... forever.
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 03:54 PM
Originally posted by Paul Jr
...You forgot me. No, I don't beleive so.Originally posted by Paul Jr
lol, I got rid of it a while back. I like this one I have now, so I'ma keep it... forever. Ewww. Howsay we starts teh petition-likes to get Paul a new avvy?
PhillMc
11-30-2004, 04:22 PM
Originally posted by Ben R.
Steelers, Peo, and you, but thats's about it. :D
And me. lol
Conor
11-30-2004, 04:28 PM
and me [/valiant return to the interweb]
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 04:38 PM
Originally posted by PhillMc
And me. lol BAH! Originally posted by Conor
and me [/valiant return to the interweb] Oh yes, reeking of valiance Conor. :rolleyes: Where you been anyhow?
PhillMc
11-30-2004, 04:40 PM
Oh, so no one cares about where I've been... :( lol
rhsunderground
11-30-2004, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by Ben R.
No, I don't beleive so. Ewww. Howsay we starts teh petition-likes to get Paul a new avvy? i like it. besides, if you're going to do that, do it in the avatars thread.
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by PhillMc
Oh, so no one cares about where I've been... :( lol Nope! :D The chess thing died, no use for you. *Banishes* :p
Well, where have you been?Originally posted by rhsunderground
i like it. besides, if you're going to do that, do it in the avatars thread. Good call...
rhsunderground
11-30-2004, 04:58 PM
you have no authority to banish my members!
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 05:01 PM
Originally posted by rhsunderground
you have no authority to banish my members! 'Course not. If I did, I'd be a mod. *Glances over at title, glares at Rizz.*
PhillMc
11-30-2004, 05:05 PM
Well, doing a lot of work on my Point-of-Sale app. Making it a cross-platform, client/server model... not easy.. lol
theuedimaster
11-30-2004, 05:41 PM
Originally posted by PhillMc
Well, doing a lot of work on my Point-of-Sale app. Making it a cross-platform, client/server model... not easy.. lol
:eek: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooh...... big words.................. so afraid... so scared ....*cuddling under desk*........
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by PhillMc
Well, doing a lot of work on my Point-of-Sale app. Making it a cross-platform, client/server model... not easy.. lol Bah! It's "not easy". Yeah right, anyone could do that.
...right? :(
Just kidding, but are you finally finished with that?
Conor
11-30-2004, 05:58 PM
busy with school unfortunately. Only 17 days until chrismas break. Then Ill finish my blog system and actually start writing again
rhsunderground
11-30-2004, 06:09 PM
i hate to get back on topic, but i was curious what you all think of my work. you can find the lot of it at http://skinneralamod.com/poems.html
i look forward to feedback from people that can read. (sorry ben)
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 06:16 PM
Originally posted by rhsunderground
i hate to get back on topic, but i was curious what you all think of my work. you can find the lot of it at http://skinneralamod.com/poems.html
i look forward to feedback from people that can read. (sorry ben) Hi-fudgin'-larious. :rolleyes: Timed out...
rhsunderground
11-30-2004, 06:35 PM
i don't know how, but you seem to be the only one that my site times out for (that's said anything to me)
Ben Rogers
11-30-2004, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by rhsunderground
i don't know how, but you seem to be the only one that my site times out for (that's said anything to me) I'm just lucky like that.
PhillMc
12-01-2004, 02:02 AM
Originally posted by Ben R.
Bah! It's "not easy". Yeah right, anyone could do that.
...right? :(
Just kidding, but are you finally finished with that?
You've got to be kidding... lol
Ask me that again in another 6 months or so; I'd write in Java and be done with it, but Java Run-Time is too slow for something like this.
RHS; your work is good; nice to know I'm not the only one with 'class and culture' around here. :p (JK)
Ben Rogers
12-01-2004, 02:44 PM
Originally posted by PhillMc
RHS; your work is good; nice to know I'm not the only one with 'class and culture' around here. :p (JK) Hey, screw you, I'm classy and well-cultured! :p
rhsunderground
12-01-2004, 02:49 PM
Originally posted by Ben R.
Hey, screw you, I'm classy and well-cultured! :p but you didn't make any comments on my work.
Ben Rogers
12-01-2004, 02:56 PM
Originally posted by rhsunderground
but you didn't make any comments on my work. 'Cuz it timed out, where you BEEN, boy?
rhsunderground
12-01-2004, 03:03 PM
well, keep trying.
MstrBob
12-01-2004, 08:37 PM
Since you always seem to be offline, Skinner, I'll just let you know. I wasn't able to finish your system for you sunday night, and on monday my teachers buried me in reports, but I dug myself out and was able to get work done tonight. Perhaps ready by tomorrow or the day after? We'll see...