Just made a wicked site! Opinions?

[crrzygirl]

Trust me, you'll probably NEVER find a site with the same theme as mine ;) I just wanted to know what others think. http://www.freewebs.com/suhariki

thanx in advance!

[LiLcRaZyFuZzY]

review the menu:
junk those bullets, or add more artistic ones. style ur menu a bit more, for example by adding a different hover state in css..etc...

add more padding, ur text is almost sticked to the border of the parent element.

thats it, gd luck!

[Charles]

See http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.freewebs.com%2Fsuhariki%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=HTML+4.01+Strict&ss=1&verbose=1 .

[rapid]

the site needs a doc type (http://www.w3.org/QA/2002/04/valid-dtd-list.html), and character encoding (http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40/charset.html).

should replace the table layout (http://www.hotdesign.com/seybold/) with css (http://www.glish.com/css/).

you are using css to control the color of the scrollbar, you can also use it to control the background color, aligning to center, font, aswell as the layout of the site, and your lists (http://www.jalfrezi.com/fstyles.htm) with something like this:

UL
{
list-style: none;
list-style-image: none;
list-style-position: outside;
display:inline;
padding: 0 0;
margin:0;
text-indent:0;
}

the links in your menu are coded as: <a href="http://www.freewebs.com/suhariki/grafix/sparklies.htm"><li>Sparkle names</a><br>
you dont need the whole address, use relative call ups (http://evolt.org/article/10_new_ways_to_speed_up_download_time/20/60294/index.html). (see number 7).

its a good idea to disable the link in the menu to the current page to prevent visitors from accidently clicking on the link and wasting time reloading the page they were already on.

'tutoral' is spelt wrong in your menu.

if/when you recode using css you may want to make the menu using buttons/whole target areas (http://developer.kde.org/documentation/design/ui/fittslaw.html) rather than text links. this will make the menu easier to use as the visitor wont have to get their mouse pointer exactly on the text before they can click on the link, and text links are better reserved for in text.

could also do with a hover state (http://www.useit.com/alertbox/20040510.html) for your links so visitors are aware what is and isnt a link when the mouse pointer is over it.

all looks very nice, no horrible color combinations.

[crrzygirl]

thanks, I'll keep that all in mind!