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p1hop
04-19-2005, 05:58 PM
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Thanks so much for reviewing my OES site...I learn a lot from your feedback.
Here another site that I am planning to go live with soon.
I was able to validate my home page with CSS and HTML 4.1 (but only after many hours of trying to figure out what W3C meant by the error).
The site is only four pages long (yeah). This site I have much more control over style, so hit it on me again. :o

http://www.mnoes.org/oeslh202/bethel40/40home.htm

(page information)

*Jobies Say The Darndest Things - is JavaScript put into frames (mad-cows script found on "The JavaScript Source" website) which I put into an I-frame so that it would look normal and also allow the user to link in and out of the page.

*Links - Is one of my first experimental pages - I have only changed the background color. I did get permission to use some of the .exe and others I do not know the author is. There maybe some .exe which are not yet uploaded because I have not worked on this page yet. I have a lot of permission work to do on this page.

Thanks

pmhauer: It's so nice to have another pair of eyes looking in.
I rearranged the pictures and it does look nicer
Relabeled home
Removing the BR...Tough one...I bit of a control freak when it comes to doing reports for the site. I remove all the BR except for one and rearranged the report.
I'm not sure about hovering and being about to achieve the same result. The darndest sayings will continue to grow over the next few months
About backspacing out of the page - I guess I will have to put up a warning.


I will be happy to look at site in the morning.

Thank you for your review - it has been very helpful. p1hop.

To Spufi – Thank you for your valuable information.

Validation is tough to achieve :( but I do feel much better that I was able too. I got through one page (only took many hours - to embarrass to admit how many). Now I only got about 60 more pages to go :p (many are hidden). Wow - I sure do have a lot of pages for someone who only started a year ago.

I also like the comment about using "semantic markup", I not sure what it means (does that have "newbe" written all over) but I will find out. ;) .

I tried to loose the headings id but the h3 by itself would not give the style I wanted. If you have any other suggestions.

Here example of my CSS for headings:
#headings {
/*Dimensions*/
width: 130px;
border: none;
border-color: black;
Padding: 0 0 0 0;
Margin: 0 0 0 0;
/*Content*/
font-size: 16px;
font-family: sans-serif;
color: purple;
text-align: center;
font-weight: 600;
}

Changed Supreme to Supreme Session...I hope that give Joe Blow reason enough to ask us about our international activities. I will continue to rethink on this bullet

Thank you for your review - it has been very helpful. p1hop.

spufi
04-19-2005, 06:53 PM
Validation is nice. Having semantic markup is also nice. :)

<div id="headings">
<strong>
Bethel WebPages
</strong></div>

Heading = header tag. Go with something like <h3>Bethel WebPages</h3> The text will be bold by default.

You need to properly markup even some of the markup you have.

<ul>
<li>Leadership<br>
<li>Public Speaking<br>
<li>Project Management<br>
<li>Conducting Meetings<br>
<li>Interacting with Adults<br>
<li>Public Service
</ul>

Needs to be...

<ul>
<li>Leadership</li>
<li>Public Speaking</li>
<li>Project Management</li>
<li>Conducting Meetings</li>
<li>Interacting with Adults</li>
<li>Public Service</li>
</ul>

Amazing things happen when you code properly. :) Also note I rarely use <br> tags at all. You have a ton of them.

EDIT: This is pretty meaningless to me.

"We also do fun things internationally: Supreme" You need to write what that specifically means so Joe Average has a clue as to what it's about.

pmhauer
04-20-2005, 01:23 AM
I don't like your third font appearance that covers this text.

"There are Job's Daughter's organizations all around the world. Membership is a great way to meet other Jobies from all over.
Check out Minnesota Job's Daughters Website for more additional information on Minnesota Job Daughters"

Unless it means something, I'd change the vertical order of the images on that screen to circle image, "palladian window", rectangle, rectangle... for better symmetry.

One I got in the site, I got lost. Didn't know how to find "home."

Take out the <br>s in this text on the home page

Congratulations to Bethel 65 who
was taken out of reorganization!
Three members participated in
the meeting by taking stations.
Two other members were great
sideliners who also participated in
the meeting!
Linda, Patty, Gayle, and Brad
were also present

because it didn't wrap correctly.

I got really annoyed that I had to backspace through all those "darndest things" when I tried to use the "back" icon on my browser. Can't you just use an img hover using CSS like naming the img something and having "a.something: hover" change the image? I don't know. Seems like Spufi would catch you on that.

Man, those girls are lucky to have someone programming their website.

Hey, now review mine. My thread is the one titled, "what have I done..."

jmaresca2005
05-19-2005, 03:17 PM
redo this site. it is not user frindly. the pages link offline. you need to clean up the nav structure.