critique my site, need feedback

[autopark]

I need feedback on my site
what should change,in the design and the script, other than the links.
http://www.auto-park-inc.com/

Thanks

[BonRouge]

Are you sure you want to know?

[vicpal25]

I would of done it first of all in XHTML/CSS. But on another hand:

- style your links. Here is the url on how to implement them http://css.maxdesign.com.au/listutorial/index.htm
- add padding to the locations and phone # box
- make links to our partners html links
- give the body margin 0 so you wont get that white bar on top of your design

other than that, nice design and use of photoshop for graphics..keep it up!

[Graph-Fix]

looks good, i think changing a few font types, maybe making them smaller would look alot better.

Take a look at my site if you need some idea. www.jlg-designs.com

[skateguy5]

hey love it exept broken links
and i have ie and slants to the left lil oh yea i have a unrelated site but still intrested in partnership email me at grossman_steve@yahoo.com

[autopark]

check out my other pages.
like this http://www.auto-park-inc.com/cars.html
do you think the header menu is better here or in the homepage.
And what do you think of the layout style
must have advice

[Sunny G]

Your website looks pretty cool. I like your image with the car in it.
However, I don't like times new roman.........
Change it to something like, Arial Narrow or something.
AND.... Maybe you could change yellow colors to a blue or gray to
go with the blue of the car image. Yellow don't work!

[BonRouge]

OK, first let me say that I agree with the others - I think your site looks very good. It's well designed. Well done.

As for the code...


Html and css should really be in lower-case.
You need more quotation marks - like here : type=text/css ("text/css")
You really shouldn't use tables for layout - see my sig.
Things like the background colour and the font size should be set in css - not the html.


It might sound strange after saying that I think your site looks good (it does) but I think you need to completely redo it bearing the points above in mind.

You probably don't think I've helped here, but you may realise that I'm right some day.

[BigRoo]

Graphically nice.
No value for the web site owner though.

Web design is not optimised for search engines:
- not enough text
- no keywords research
- no scoring title
- no META tags
Not surfer friendly:
- too many images and size is too big - on many connections will
load slower than 12 sec.

The industry is very competitive - you will not be able to break through.
Users will not find the web site - too many others.

IMO you need:
- optimised design
- keywords research and basic optimisation
- strong SEO copy
- a lot MORE pages - each optimised for a specific keyword.
- move out styles in separate file

Good starting point: get SEO Explorer - it is free search engine optimisation tool (http://www.internet-marketing-australia.com/seo-explorer.php)

It will show you what is not good from SEO point of view and what to enhance..

[buntine]

At first glance, your Web Site looks fine. But your HTML is badly written and your sub-pages (cars.html for example) are badly formatted.

It look's like you have bought a template and tried to edit the HTML manually. You need to learn HTML and accessability concepts before you try to write a Web Site. This looks like a Web Site that is 40% complete there are several dead links and a whole bunch unformatted data lying around the site. Fix it!

Regards.

[jmaresca2005]

center the table to the screen and use a style sheet to dress up the font. i never use times new roman which is the default. i like verdana and so does alot of other big websites, like msn.