http://x9.ulanguzi.net/index.php

[benrequena]

Thanks for the feedback. CLOSED

[KDLA]

Hi benrequena -

Have you looked at your page using high resolution screen settings? The black area with "RBW" takes up about half of the screen. You need to decrease the size of that, so everything appears when the page loads. Your page is really messy when viewing with an 800x600 setting.
Check this out for more info.: http://webxact.watchfire.com/themes/standard-en-us/help/HIDD_WDContent_G104.html

You might consider using a rollover effect for your links. Although they are obviously navigation, it still would be more "user-friendly" if the links were made more apparent by a color change or something.

Wow! You look amazingly like George Hamilton ;) -- do you sell tanning products and/or Old Navy clothes when you're not designing webpages?

Lastly, you might consider keeping the navigation consistent throughout the site. I noticed that some pages have only the "required four" links, while others have supplemental links.

A nice start -

Good Luck!
KDLA

[benrequena]

Thanks KDLA for the ideas and headsup on the hi-res settings.

Keep the critiques coming.

[cbstudio]

i agree with kdla for the most part. needs rollovers and the top parts needs to be smaller. As for the gradient underneith the active link. I like the idea but i think it would look even better if you lowered the opacity just a tad.

other than that the site looks great. you'll have to tell us when it's finished.

[russell_g_1]

looks good. simple designs are almost always best. :D

(although i agree with the points above, especially about the inconsistent nav)

[spufi]

The size of space below the logo is differnet on the home page than it is on the other pages. Make the home page like the others. Beyond that, is that actually going to be your URL? I ask because it's ugly in terms of trying to remember it. RBW is so straight forward, but x9.ulanguzi.net far from rolls of the tounge. Plus there is no connection between the site name and URL.

[comptech520]

I noticed that when you hover over the contact button, the alt tag is set to home.