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patrickj
11-05-2005, 09:12 PM
I have done my design and I am now looking to get some critisism on it, it does have content, just dummy content so to speak. This design is for my design company and im looking for a second opinion to see if I should put it on the web safely.
Well here goes nothing!
Design (http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/9705/design3qo.png)
Article at my blog about it (http://www.patrickjoh.com/article/15/mephion-v2-design)
Thanks in advance :)
ray326
11-06-2005, 01:38 AM
Very sparse but that's ok.
patrickj
11-06-2005, 01:57 AM
well there will also be like recent 6 works that I have done, and maybe a few more things but hows the base design right now?
patrickj
11-06-2005, 02:15 PM
does anyone else have any more comments about it? I wanna know if its good before I start coding it!
LiLcRaZyFuZzY
11-06-2005, 02:22 PM
nice!
Though, i'd make the whole "client login" lighter, meaning the input elements borders lighter.
Because when i see your design, i kinda only see the login area
Nice. I like the "frog" green. Different and appealing to the eye.
Just remember, don't put a link ON the homepage TO the homepage, and the like. :)
Good Luck -
KDLA
I like it, but you need to use bold sparingly, not all the text.
why are you writing the version of the site design on the page, it serves no use to the audience. i would remove it.
patrickj
11-08-2005, 05:08 PM
alright these comments are duely noted, thanks :)
drumguy8800
11-08-2005, 07:46 PM
Here's some critique..
The title is a bit small. If I were you, I'd make it bigger, and I'd make the 'M' even bigger than the rest of it. I don't know if you were planning to, but the entire content should *definitely* be centered. As in, instead of it backing up to the top-left corner, stick it in a <div style='text-align: center; width: 100%'> div.. Then it would conform to each user's screen. At least, center on it, until the window got too small.
The copyright code may need to *not* be bold.. and there should be a break (maybe a green line) between it and the rest of the content.
I do like the coloration. One thing that bothers me though is that the entire menu is green. If there were going to be any submenus, that would be very cool.. as in, you click on one item, and the rest of the menu shifts down and a *white* with green border box fills in with some content/submenu. You should have one of the menus open (maybe some quick contact info) when the page is loaded so that it'll get rid of the overbearingness of the green. That's just something I'd do.. you may think it's whack. In general, the style is very clean and friendly. Curly braces are always cool ;)