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captian caveman
03-17-2006, 08:56 AM
OK, I am using tools to build my site that a dummy could use but I do use html to do several things. Please look at www.osmoutdoorcreations.com and let me know what you think. I do not have all of the alt text in yet and many pages do not have the meta tags. I will be putting them in as the site is ready for more attention.

Thanks, Tom

Launchnet
03-17-2006, 09:09 AM
Just took a very fast tour and it looks OK. I'm not one that likes green, so don't use this as a negative.

Unless I just didn't see them, I think some pictures of Green Houses would add to the saleability.

I invite you to take a look at the site I am working on. Maybe we can cross link for added viewers.

www.openoursite.com

Thanks
Matt

KDLA
03-17-2006, 09:35 AM
You might focus on design consistency among the pages. Several fonts and colors are being used, creating a disjointed (unprofessional) look.

The addition of some brighter colors might make the design more exciting.

Good Luck -
KDLA

fastfind
03-17-2006, 09:42 AM
its nice but if u make your header bit colorfull like every word with different color ,colors tht match ur background color so i think its enchanced ur site more..its just my thought if u like it then let it be like this :)

ray326
03-17-2006, 10:51 AM
The design is definitely old school but everything's nice an readable. You need to have someone else read everything on the site and point out semantic errors like.

"It takes allot of man hours..."
"We do not build homes do to the amount of time..."

ProWeb
03-17-2006, 10:56 AM
Agreed with ray on the old school point. The animated gif on the front page does no favours to the overall look of the site. A nice shot of some products would be far better.

captian caveman
03-17-2006, 03:20 PM
Thanks for the tips. I did use some of them and have more changes to make. I do agree that someone needs to read over my site. As many times as I have read it I still miss mistakes.

I got rid of my worm

The header is supposed to represent old stone. Any Ideas how to make it more stony?

Tom

Bill_OldO
03-17-2006, 05:44 PM
Relook at the shortcuts on the bottom of the page.
To me they seem either to small in font size or the line spacing
should be increased from 1 to 1.5
When you mouse over them you really do not know which shortcut you are
actually on without reading the bottom browser bar.