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    Flyer review please...

    I have designed a flyer that I want to use to advertise my business, but I wanted the opinions of a few designers to see how I may improve the design. The flyer will be Letter size and full color.

    Here are links to the file for viewing:
    PDF version: quality not so great: http://www.visualacuitydesign.com/images/MedicalNTM.pdf
    & Here is a JPG: http://www.visualacuitydesign.com/images/MedicalNTM.jpg

    Your reviews will be greatly appreciated. Just a side not I designed it in Microsoft Publisher.

    Thanx,

    Ronen

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    IT looks fine... I would do this though, take a couple days off from looking at it and then see if there is anything that looks out of place to you. Or Print it out turn it upside down and see if you can notice anything that needs to be changed.

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    Thanks thats a good idea

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    on second thought... you should modify the pricing chart and put in the regular rate then cross it out and leave the discounted price.

    OR you may get the slickster client who wants an additional discount off of the posted rate on your handout.

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    The arial font is bugging me a bit - it looks a bit cheesy. That's probably the wrong word - it makes the flyer look a bit "home made." I'd look for something with just a bit more style to it. For example the font used in the heading of your web site is much nicer, and then your flyer and site would match a bit more. Nice job on the colors and artwork, by the way.

    Also, possibly a pet peeve of mine, why the "@" sign instead of "at" on the "schedule an appointment" line? Did your IM-speak just sneak out for that one word?

    Dave

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    Thanks for the feedback guys. I took some of your advice and tweeked the flyer a wee bit. so if you would like to check it out her is a link to the refined JPG file:

    http://www.visualacuitydesign.com/images/MedicalNTM.jpg

    -Niki

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    Looks nice!

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