also feel free to post them in the fine arts thread
Oooh, I'd love to! I just have a problem with the copyright policy, lol! I'm particularly sensitive. Well, will see if I've something that I don't mind surrendering all rights to. Heh.
Originally Posted by rhsunderground
Btw, you've some nice pieces in that thread! (^_^)
I like that to save an empire.
The lake one was kinda simmilar to another book I've read and need a little more detail in various sections.
Try to make your sentences shorter and more hurried during certain sections to give an actual impression of, for example, being dragged underwater and having dificulty breathing.
I've still not looked at your non-fiction yet, but I'll take a look now and tell you what i think.
When I revise THE LAKE for resubmission, I'll do that, re shorter sentences.
Thanks for the feedback on the fiction; I'm glad you liked TO SAVE AN EMPIRE.
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glad i made it here! i only know basics so i am hoping to learn much more...
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maybe this should have gone in the "inroduce yourself" thread? after all it is stickied.
MOD EDIT: threads merged.
Last edited by rhsunderground; 05-23-2005 at 04:58 PM.
thank you guys for the warm welcome
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