Design Feedback for cheaphtmldesign.com

[Haze1434]

The website is only just being developed, nothing will work yet (only 1 page so far).

I would just like some feedback about the look of the main page and if you like it.

I would also like to know if it works OK in all browsers.

http://www.cheaphtmldesign.com

Thanks.

[wh666-666]

Ahhhhhhhhhhh my eyes, my beautiful eyes!


My first thought is I cant see much of the page or the green writing because im blinded by the bright colours ...

I know you want to make an impact but its like being punched in the face ....

[Haze1434]

Lol fair enough, I'll dim down some of those colours =P

[Pris]

Is the line "Join us" done in Paint? It really harms the overall nice look of the design.

[Haze1434]

Is the line "Join us" done in Paint? It really harms the overall nice look of the design.

Hiya Pris,

It was a font in GIMP, I forget which one now. Would it look better with a clean arrow and text instead do you think? Or any ideas?

Thanks

[Pris]

If you've got a nice handwriting you could write the text on a piece of paper and scan it (yay for oldskool!) or look for a handwritten fonttype at a site like dafont.com (under Script or maybe even something more fancy like this)