Hope this helps too because incorrect grammar and spelling say, "I am not professional." My advice is to have someone who is not your friend or family go through your site and give you a thorough critique on the writing and the message.
This page: http://jick.zacknetwork.net/index.php
-Has the link to SubSilver. But, the SubSilver site has some bugs in NN7.
-"We now have a time durning each..." should be "We now have a time during each..."
-"...news for you. Your wrong..." should be "...news for you. You're wrong..."
-"We have had many years of web design and web development experience" If this is true why do you supply only two samples of your work?
-"...large and safisticated script..." should be "...large and sophisticated script..."
-"Because of all those reasons we can not supply an exact price so we ask that you please get in contact with us by going to our contact us page and sending us a message through one of our forms of contact telling us what type of site you want and a little description and also what you would like to have on it and we will reply to you with a quote on how much it will cost to get your site launched onto the web today!" This sentence suffers from a little bit of run on. Speaking of which, some of your other material is too long. I think you'll lose their interest. And you'll have it up today? How are you going to do that?
-"...you are completly..."
-"just look at our prices page", but you said you only do custom quotes.
-"and you lernt a little"
-"you just wanna know"
-"We hope you find it usfull."
-"recieving" Remember the basic grammar rule, "i before e except after c?"
-email or e-mail, decide which one you want to use and then do it that way everywhere.
-"contact us regaurding these"
Sincerely, I hope it helps make your site the best it can be.