Would you please look at my new sales page and tell me what you think of it? www.phonewired.com/supply.htm you can email me at firstname.lastname@example.org Thank you!
In terms of aesthetics its a bit plain maybe using some layout structure may help this.
Also you page has no doctype therefore it will not validate without one.
looks like the classic diy website :p um i would start to use a basic wysiwyg editor such as dreamweaver or my fav namo webeditor 6 if you dnt want to buy it or download it at least use even front page
Thank you for your input. It is your help that will lead us to a point of being able to produce a quality product. Thanks.
Well, I would advise against using an editor, but it IS very basic. I would advise learning CSS to enhance your site aesthetically, as well as rethinking the look altogether, which seems pretty much non-existant...